Wii Revolution Issue 1

Very Hard Brawlers Posts : 54 Join date : 2008-02-13

Enjoy, I will post a lot more information on the ONM Forums

Subject: Re: Wii Revolution Issue 1 Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:24 pm

looking good there Alan, and just to let you know you can sticky them if you want.

Hard Brawlers Posts : 49 Join date : 2008-02-24

Its great well done.
I have noticed that bits have been cut off from my review of bwii and kirby's adventure.

Subject: Re: Wii Revolution Issue 1 Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:08 pm

wow, lookin great.
by the way, how often does the E-mag get sent out?

Subject: Re: Wii Revolution Issue 1 Sun Mar 16, 2008 7:30 am

It looks very good - however the spelling is poor in places and with an editor and a co-editor you really should pay attention to this. Post all pages for next issue in the 'testing pages' thread and I will go over and correct everything.

It just makes it look more professional - apart from that the E-mag is coming along nicely!!!!!!!

P.S. also try to keep the entire mag in the same font size - it makes it look better believe me.

Crazy Hand Posts : 172 Join date : 2008-01-14

Maceo007 wrote:: It looks very good - however the spelling is poor in places and with an editor and a co-editor you really should pay attention to this. Post all pages for next issue in the 'testing pages' thread and I will go over and correct everything.

It just makes it look more professional - apart from that the E-mag is coming along nicely!!!!!!!

P.S. also try to keep the entire mag in the same font size - it makes it look better believe me.

and with

I puplish them so Lfc_luca dosent get to see them until they are posted.

The test was 14 and the title was 25, it was just the way the templates were

Subject: Re: Wii Revolution Issue 1 Sun Mar 16, 2008 12:09 pm

What???????

Subject: wii revolution issue one Tue Mar 18, 2008 3:01 pm

Looking great, but is there any way the screenshots could be less faded and a bit more crisp?

Subject: Re: Wii Revolution Issue 1 Tue Mar 18, 2008 4:01 pm

last time i checked, brawl wasnt yet released in the UK

an some of the reviews are cut off, and the titles are wrongly spaced.

also, how often does the E-Mag get sent out?

also, why not use my review for BWii, it's a lot better

one last thing, would you like me to edit it? because there are so many spelling errors in it that really should be addressed. like fantistic and mulitplayer